FEI WILL KILL YOU

First off, can I say, I LOVE your use of textures and colours. The background works very well with Fei herself, and the lightning creeping up her arm is fantastic.

I wish the real world was made of your colouring. It's fantastic, and had a really good basis, especially for along creases and curves of the body. I think if you just work on light sources and enlarge the dark shadows a tiny bit in future pictures. But don't overboard on it, because it does look fantastic, and less is more. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

Anatomy of the body is great. Love it. My only issue is the placement of the facial features. Literally, that's the only flaw I can see - perhaps do a few studies of faces from real life, look at proportions and distances? If you can fix up that stuff, there is no reason for your art to be showcased on the front page of DA, because it certainly can make it there and I can see no reason why not.

Another little pet peeve is the light sparkles on her jacket / tank top... They're a little, uh... sensitively placed. xD;

An amazing piece overall which shows off a lot of hard-earned talent. A few tweaks and practices with faces and you'll be just as good as any famous artist on here. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/> Well done!!